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Another Day (haiku)

by Joe David

Sun streaks morning sky
Day breaks through in full glory
Night retreats to wait


Posted on 09/29/2009
Copyright © 2020 Joe David

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/29/09 at 06:48 PM

...quuuuit it. mmmm :-0)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 10/01/09 at 04:06 PM

Oh Charlie I will never cease to marvel at your sick sense of humor and smile at the raspy exchanges between the Bewildered and the Misbehaving author of See Through which can still be purchased online for $14.95 if you hurry (http://www.alibris.com/search/books/isbn/1413719090). But now that I have taken so much space with theChaz let me turn to the one whom it is really all about. Joe, your poem makes me want to go back to sleep just so I can awaken to its beaming simplicity and truth. Night might retreat, but it always awaits to envelop our daily glories - so why not be in that present sun streaked sky where - if we are truly smart - we can find the eternal now. I am so glad that you are willing to reveal for all of us to observe your love affair with the haiku. You two are creating something delightful new life.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/25/10 at 02:10 AM

Two solid elements of our existance - day and night - they flow together perfectly in this.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/27/15 at 11:53 AM

only poets know how to make heads or tails out of day or night, save Michelangelo in his two famous statues depicting such.

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