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Overloaded

by Glenn Currier

Sweetpea is chattering
eyes affixed
the dove feeding
on today’s seeds.

A flock of grackles
crowd the scene
the cat overloaded
turns and leaves.

Scanning today’s headlines
sadly recalling
last night’s shouting
and posturing

I toss Newsweek
open Billy Collins
bathe in the cool
fluid of his lines.

08/25/2009

Posted on 08/25/2009
Copyright © 2025 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 08/25/09 at 05:29 PM

Good write Glenn, but poetry rarely is soothing for me. The juices start to flow when words find my ears.

Posted by A. Paige White on 08/25/09 at 05:37 PM

Overloaded but an overcomer! Toss that rag and pen some more lines like the first two. Are you taking requests? *giggle* (They were my favorite in this) Very enjoyable.

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/25/09 at 06:25 PM

I'm afraid I'm with George, I can hardly contain the urges to write even anticipating reading...but I do, and Neruda is soothing to me. Collins is smooth, like Kooser, their poems are like little pools of quietness. I like the "turn" your fourth strophe engages here. Nice write. Thanks.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/26/09 at 03:27 AM

Really a wonderful flow to this. I enjoy the scene with the cat which ties in with your newspaper reading. Overloaded - a fine title, and I salute your solution!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/27/09 at 01:50 PM

...ohhh, glenn, you had the nerve to read the paper. sheeesh! what guts, what stamina...now the collins pomes are a delight. ahhhh.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/29/09 at 06:21 PM

This is a very fun...bubbly...jazzy read Glenn. It has a freshness to it that shouts contemporary, and yet I still feel a tremendous yet comfortable connectedness with the past in reading it. Touché old man!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/30/09 at 02:05 AM

Fun reading Glenn...CharMin

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/30/09 at 08:00 PM

Thanks for the comment Glenn....CharMin

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 09/04/09 at 01:50 PM

I have Collins on top of my Hutch at Work, love that angle dancing on the tip of pin, nice work and yes put that paper down unless you want to try blackout poetry where you blackout the words except for the ones that make up your poem, now that is an interesting way to look for inspiration. smh

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 09/04/09 at 01:50 PM

I mean angel or course.

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/04/09 at 02:04 PM

Perfect meter and flow...to go! Isn't Billy Collins the one that wrote "The Names" I read in our local newspaper (when I still lived in America) after 9/11?

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