| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 08/17/09 at 02:07 PM Isn't it amazing how truth can manage to hide from hungry eyes all the while standing (and shouting!) out in the wide open of no disguise. Love this! |
| Posted by Maude Curtis on 08/17/09 at 02:47 PM this sounds like a Kai question. Funny how sumple questions like this makes ya go, HUMM??? |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/17/09 at 04:28 PM That's easy, I do. I started just after I found my true love from late high school had just married and she never told me till after the fact. Or are those tears I count? Good write Charlie. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 08/17/09 at 05:51 PM I wonder too, so often. What do people know, what are they conscious of, and what is just in them... |
| Posted by V. Blake on 08/17/09 at 07:14 PM That first paragraph is one of the most clever things I think I've ever read. This is outstanding. You continue to impress. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/18/09 at 12:22 AM Oh such philosophy can be a conundrum but you pose your questions well my friend. smh |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 08/18/09 at 12:22 AM Oh such philosophy can be a conundrum but you pose your questions well my friend. smh |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 08/18/09 at 09:00 AM Wow-ee! This is superb! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/18/09 at 01:56 PM Very deep and touching... almost Zen! Nicely expressed Chaz. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/18/09 at 07:35 PM What a great question/poem. Again, like a cunning pirate, find the hidden human treasure, claim it in your heart and then your pen shares the wealth. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/19/09 at 05:22 PM A clever look inside our minds and how we reason, and what we ask. Thank you, Charlie. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/24/09 at 02:31 PM Nice one Charlie. Well worded reminder that we can often underestimate the intelligence/wisdom of those around us, or at least wonder if they're playing with us by playing stupid. Congrats also on hitting No. 1; nice to see what can happen when people go to the trouble of voting for fellow members. |
