| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 08/04/09 at 04:08 PM HA! This is too good. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 08/04/09 at 04:50 PM Aren't children the best poetry, written or spoken,ever? Loved this. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 08/04/09 at 06:12 PM Saved better that any video or audio recording could do justice, immortalized poetically. There's such beauty all around our traveled paths, if we have attentive eyes and ears we can catch them hiding among such familiar things, no matter how commonplace the guise may be. Thanks for this! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/04/09 at 07:50 PM Great write Kristina. Observation with eyes and ears is they greatest creative gift humans have. Nicely done! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 08/04/09 at 08:38 PM ...kristina, what a "Holy" moment of innocence...i'm envious of your capture...love it when that happens... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/06/09 at 02:44 AM The part I like is visioning you walking in that park, noticing and listening to those children. And I agree with what Charlie said above about a holy moment of innocence. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/08/09 at 12:35 AM Ditto to what has been written. A memorable moment captured for all time. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 08/08/09 at 01:38 PM to read this wee poem is to adore it in a big way, Kristina. It says it all in the glint of a few words. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/15/09 at 10:17 PM lol that's a wonderful piece of observation. Lovely :) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/04/10 at 05:28 PM Out of the mouths of babes, comes the truth. Great observation. Great read! Thanks. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 08/10/11 at 09:11 AM I just had to read some of your work again to get my head around your style and back to pathetic.org. I've been away awhile and good to see you in your words. What a fine example this is! |
