| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 08/03/09 at 05:59 PM what a dream! rainbow serpent... thought provoking. |
| Posted by Jim Benz on 08/03/09 at 07:05 PM ah, I see your shards. nice. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/05/09 at 01:13 AM Short but punchy. This has a definite Jim Morrison quality to it; fine update to the "serpent king" as he put it. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/08/09 at 12:57 PM Quite interesting analogy! Greatly appeals to the senses. |
| Posted by Christine Thibeault on 01/24/10 at 07:26 PM ~Wonderful~ |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/08/10 at 08:48 PM Your words rumble and thunder wake from slumber - I'm looking for the sun, not knowing whether to fear or admire this rainbow serpent. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/09/12 at 11:03 AM truly fantastic images you've woven here, Melanie. a beautiful tapestry of words and sounds, which anyone would be proud to hang on their soul. |
