| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 07/30/09 at 03:03 PM Great write Charlie!! Well done. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/30/09 at 04:14 PM That's exactly why I don't worry about saving for any sort of a rainy day. It's all about being in the moment, because from what I can tell, it's all we really have. I like the implied, rather than direct, references in this, Charlie. And I like the idea of you giggling off the top of your head. |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 07/30/09 at 05:21 PM This is a delight to read... how beautiful. This is going right on my favorites!! |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 07/30/09 at 06:05 PM You sure know how to get my giggles going Chaz. "it was my fault. i had left the lid up;" if that's not about a porcelain throne, it made me laugh like it was anyway... you boys tend to do that... and we girls fall in. heheheeee.... love this Chaz! my pick for potd. spend your pennies with me darlin, in poetry like this, worth millions (of giggles). |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 07/30/09 at 08:52 PM I really enjoyed the metaphor of the top of your head giggling.
Though short, it tells well the details of how we succumb to those moments that we mistakenly reserve for rainy days.
Terrific poem, Mr. Morgan, thank you.
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| Posted by Maude Curtis on 07/31/09 at 01:12 AM Someday I'll tell the tale of the lid that was left up and the repercussions of that incident. It was a laughable rainy day for sure, back in my biker chick dayz. ;-) |
| Posted by Allison Smith on 07/31/09 at 01:43 AM "the Sun broke through,
and the top of my head
started giggling;"
Those lines are golden. |
| Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 08/01/09 at 01:16 PM *chuckle*
Truly, a good poem, Charlie, as they all are. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/02/09 at 09:44 PM I have enjoyed the rain, but your poem tells me there was so much more there that I missed. But... I didn't miss it because here I am - you raining your giggles on me. Your rays lighten me. Now if I could figure out how to make them burn calories, I would be set. Love it, Chaz. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 08/03/09 at 12:14 AM sounds like quite the day! what a way to capture it! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/04/09 at 01:29 AM Excellent combination...interaction between you and the environment Charlie. Tickling always adds an amusing touch (pardon the pun) to any humorous poem. Hat's off ta ya. :o) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/04/09 at 01:30 AM PS: Highly (another pun haha) appropriate title BTW. Adds to favorites. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/09/09 at 02:57 AM My new favorite of yours - I had not seen this one! Thank you for this loud laughter - much needed, and the pennies you were so rich with, I suspect you spent sharing with the rest of us. Nice one, Charlie! Thank you. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/10/09 at 12:12 AM j o y ! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Hoadley on 08/12/09 at 09:09 PM bravo! |
| Posted by Laurie Blum on 08/14/09 at 02:47 AM I love this one! So playful and sincere. Great poem Chaz. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/13/11 at 06:07 PM congrats on this being POTD today!!! I loved it then, I love it still!! |
| Posted by Shonda Chrissonberry on 02/13/11 at 07:56 PM chaz...what joy you bring with your tellin o'tha tales...and this is no exception...love this. congrats on POTD!!! *hugs* |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/13/11 at 08:35 PM quite worthy of POTD. great write |
| Posted by Steve Michaels on 02/14/11 at 04:08 AM Congrats on POTD and yeah, giggles are worth their weight in gold! |
| Posted by Linda Fuller on 02/15/11 at 03:05 PM belated congrats on POTD - charming, Morganesque pome. |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 02/16/11 at 03:44 AM you are always a pleasure to read, and this is no exception...how u have my mind smiling as I read you, soaking it all up...kudos on arriving again on the top-rated list, peace, jewels |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 02/16/11 at 01:32 PM Sharp and witty..another Morgan masterpiece! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/17/11 at 11:41 PM wonderful write- thanks! |
