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Watermelon Wine

by A. Paige White



All the boy kisses in my life
are flavored watermelon

gloriously watered melon
the moustache

half + a year: half + a century
silver

half + of a year: captures a whole heart
in pudgy little fists

Watermelon Wine
still on the vine

My heart
My mind

Photobucket

07/05/2009

Author's Note:

Intoxicating vapors... in a dry season fairer than wine

"I will allure her, and bring her into the wilderness
...And I will give her her vineyards from there." Hosea 2:14, 15

Posted on 07/05/2009
Copyright © 2021 A. Paige White

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Alison McKenzie on 07/05/09 at 07:38 PM

I like, I like soooooo very much!!!

Posted by Olivia Martin on 07/05/09 at 08:37 PM

Beautiful, amazing piece -- may you have a few more centuries of innocent "watermelon kisses" -- those will be the ones you never forget :)

Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/06/09 at 02:39 AM

Gees! You sure do know how to get the attention of this A.D.D. guy! The richness of the images, and luscious, evocative imagery awaken the babe in me.

Posted by Maude Curtis on 07/06/09 at 04:55 PM

Wonderful and fun. I love those watermelon kisses. I wish I had the techno knowledge to do this imagery. thanks for the great job.

Posted by Wendy Sparling on 07/07/09 at 05:01 AM

Mmmmmmm ... watermelon kisses are the best!

Posted by JD Clay on 07/09/09 at 12:34 AM

This is very creative, Paige. Gotta love those fat little fingers. Cute kids too!

Posted by Julie Adams on 07/09/09 at 06:17 PM

sugary sweeeeeet...

Posted by Tony Whitaker on 07/12/09 at 09:34 AM

Wow, what a lyrical gem and visually stimulating read and page! Clever my dear Paige! Very clever and I know you are so proud of your "fruit of the vine".

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 07/12/09 at 06:43 PM

Delightful, precious thoughts! Thanks for sharing this summer moment.

Posted by Maria Massarella on 07/13/09 at 12:21 AM

Oh the wonder-sweetness of watermelon kisses & wine! A delight in all ways. The view and the words....m.a

Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 07/13/09 at 07:57 AM

How easily the pudgy fingers can hold a heart..and squeeze the lines right out. Perfect Paige.

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/13/09 at 03:20 PM

Wonderfully sweet and innocent!

Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 07/17/09 at 11:11 AM

mmmm.mmmmm. this makes me hungry-hungry for the moments expressed in your wonderful poem, Paige. Lovely work.precious!

Posted by Charlie Morgan on 07/17/09 at 02:15 PM

...golly gee Dr. Rippey! i was expecting to be teased ever-so-lovingly with your slant on things Watermelon wine-ish...what a serendipitous delight..i wanna swallow the enitre screening page, his head, your head[hidden], all the fleur de lis, i hate to click-off to do my life, when we get to Heaven maybe we get "backgrounds" of our choice...a bow.

Posted by Michael Smith on 07/29/09 at 04:31 PM

How very creative :)

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/10/10 at 11:56 AM

blessed is this watermelon poem and sweet and even more blessed and sweet when it is time to spit out the watermelon seeds in this game to see who could spit them the furthest and I must say this poem goes as far as any seed to hit its mark.

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