| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/27/09 at 05:10 PM Oh, but the most beautiful rantings! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 04/27/09 at 06:25 PM Give me a squeeze not a sneeze. Blow the pollen away and take a fresh deep breath. Good write lady. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/27/09 at 06:28 PM ....I think it's all in your head! |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/27/09 at 09:18 PM May allergy season soon pass! God bless you for all your ACHOOS! |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 04/30/09 at 02:01 AM I like this as an odd and imagistic look within. The last two lines are especially terrific.... d:-) |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/30/09 at 03:44 PM You are winking everywhere, no doubt ;)
I love the eyelash part especially. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/18/09 at 01:39 PM Thought provoking, and quite nice in how this leaves the reader to their own interpretations. I especially like the ring of these words/lines: an inside the head with odd
blinkings
where the downstroke may
have missed |
| Posted by JD Clay on 05/20/09 at 10:47 PM It's plain to see you are dedicated to simplicity. This serendipitous poem cleaves the mind and heals the soul. All in the blink of an introverted eye. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/16/09 at 12:49 AM I love what jadi said above. He DOES have a way, doesn't he? I can relate to the effort required to move beyond the stuffiness inside to hang some meaning, some deserved moment of attention where it will do some good. Thanks for your dedication. |
