innit by Kristina Woodhill i love this world with everything innit the fudge and the sludge and the tick of each minnit i love the smidgeons the grandiose mountains the small and the tall sharing lemonlime fountains i've swum some down under and challenged my breathing, and found deep in caves can believe without seeing my toes have dipped oceans my heels have hiked hills, kind hands I have held sharing humankind thrills I'm totally smitten by ladders for climbing if cherries are waiting or apples are pie-ning as denizens go i must follow my friend* where kittizens' pause and no purring pretends i soar over borders invisibly framed invisibly inked by divisible brains i shall tippy-toe by i shall leap frog those thoughts that alleviate peace that are obstaclebots though legions of lesions might oozily sneer this skin might be wrinkled but it's still glass clear i love this world with everything innit 04/14/2009 Author's Note: *a nod to Philip De Pinto and his kittizens Posted on 04/14/2009 Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill Member Comments on this Poem Posted by Clara Mae Gregory on 04/14/09 at 05:58 PM Wow.Another going in my favorites.This is great! Loved every flowing word,invented or otherwise. :) Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/14/09 at 07:01 PM I find something comforting in this....an I just sympathetic to well rhymed verse...or is it the kittizens....what ever it may be, I love it. Signed, a reader, but never a critizen.... Posted by George Hoerner on 04/14/09 at 07:15 PM Really cute Kristina!! I love the flow of the rhyme. There is nothing init I don't care for. Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/15/09 at 01:15 AM Wonderfully whimsical, humorous, and delightful! Your poetry's priceless, if offered as prize, The receiver be proud that s/he'd be the one to winnit! Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/16/09 at 02:15 PM When is the last time I told you you're a gem of a writer? Your play and seriousness with words is purely essential to my well-being! And kudos to Philip, a most magnificent inspirer! Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 04/16/09 at 11:21 PM I love the depth of this whimsy. And I found it to be a perfect response to the "citizen of the world" thread. Posted by Tim D Livingston on 04/17/09 at 10:21 PM This is just amazing. So much life in these words! I wouldn't call any poem a masterpiece, but this one is dangerously close. Posted by Karen Michelle on 04/18/09 at 11:05 AM I loved every word. This is going in my favourites. Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/25/09 at 12:32 PM would it surprise you Kristina, that I love this poem and every thing innit? including the nod. Posted by Laura Doom on 05/24/09 at 12:07 AM How did I miss something this sublime? Massive. Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/01/09 at 11:01 PM I love you lovinit. Your poem permeates me with freshness and hope. Thanks for the spritely soul which is you. :-) Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/01/10 at 06:37 PM Your outlook on life is wounderful. Great title... Great piece. I love eeverything "innit". Posted by Rob Littler on 08/16/13 at 07:25 AM Dr. Chartreuss Return to the Previous Page   pathetic.org Version 7.3.2 May 2004 Terms and Conditions of Use 0 member(s) and 2 visitor(s) online All works Copyright © 2025 their respective authors. Page Generated In 0 Second(s)