| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 02/21/09 at 09:11 PM I adored the clever way of keeping the rhythm with, "salty finity". Nothing lost there, and smart throughout!!!
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/22/09 at 05:38 PM What does it all mean! One can see a brutal editor having at it, one can. or my brain sorting through, sorting through..... Clever, my friend. |
| Posted by Stephan Anstey on 02/22/09 at 06:57 PM You are so devilishly smart Ms. Jill. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/23/09 at 01:17 PM I agree with ALL of the above! Your creativity and talent scare me. Wonderful read as always! |
| Posted by Aaron Michael on 02/23/09 at 07:14 PM another amazement, Jill. wonderful. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 03/01/09 at 02:25 PM enigmatic variations
who would pen the sphere's mistress to the circle? I'm all aquiver to bear such mauling :> |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 03/31/09 at 11:35 AM to sea
is to reed
to reed is to heed
that art
inordinate as this can'st but be
manufactured in the heart |
| Posted by Michael Smith on 07/30/09 at 06:48 PM That last couplet must be the spell you always say t'consistently capture us again and again, Ms. Jill.
Poemus Tremendous!
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/02/09 at 12:17 PM Catchy use of linguistics from start to finish. I really like how you start each stanza with t' also. Quite original. |
