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the pirates are running amok

by Kristina Woodhill

the pirates are running amok
there's no safety in numbers or ledger demain
you may think that you're spelling it right from the book
and the ending will letter a gain
but the pirates are running amok

the flags that are flying are chic
the rogers are jolly, ship masts tip way past sky high
and you'd think with the grinning we'd all be in smiles
and the thrown bones would answer us why
the flags that are flying are chic

the hands that are wringing are tight
there's a gang plank protruding out into the sea
the crew has grown tired of water from kegs
as the captains drink rum or black tea
now the hands that are ringing are tied

the pirates are running amok
there's been news now of boats taking ships for a ride
but the looting on land inside rooms at the top
makes the sea boys' small plunders low tide
for the pirates are running amok

11/19/2008

Posted on 11/20/2008
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 11/20/08 at 12:26 AM

With all due understatement, Miss Kristina, I can always count on your poetry to glisten my mind. This sparkles with treasured inuendo. I am curious if I've guessed correctly that this poem is, in part, inspired by the current pirate situation in the news?

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/20/08 at 02:50 AM

You bring pirateering up-to-date and compare it very insightfully to what has happened--is happening--in all too many businesses. (We've lost our moral compass in this nation as it has been lost in so much of the world. Globalization?)

Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/20/08 at 04:51 AM

I can hear a jig here! Enjoyed it very much!!! MFS

Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/20/08 at 08:27 PM

...hey thei is wonderful, Kristina. Yes, there is divisivness going on. In full pirate regalia, and in three-peice suits! Thanks.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/20/08 at 09:14 PM

Aye matey they are that. Good pirate tale lassie....CharMin

Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/23/08 at 06:25 AM

Insightful piece. I especially like this: "looting on land inside rooms at the top." What is needed is just as much creativity in how to prevent amokness as in where to invest the profits. Clever and thought-provoking piece, Kristina.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/08/08 at 05:41 PM

For me, this poem works wonderfully in two ways. In metaphor for what's happening in the USA with the financial meltdown and auto giants near failure. But also on a concrete level, as a scene perhaps from Pirates Of The Carribean. Yo! ho! ho! I picture Johnny Depp at the wheel.

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