| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/17/08 at 04:05 AM Wow, welcome to pathetic.org Vrinda! Such a sharp twist in that last stanza, saying it all, about the end of a relationship. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/17/08 at 06:18 AM Definitely a great shot from left field in those closing thoughts of yours. Great stuff. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 11/17/08 at 06:57 PM Very nicely said. And welcomd to pathetic with the rest of us pathetic creatures. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/20/08 at 02:38 AM Using contradiction you describe the ambiguity of a lost relationship adeptly. Welcome to Pathetic.org. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/28/09 at 01:54 AM Especially love that last stanza. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/19/14 at 11:24 AM the words you present here are well gathered and I don't know if their having been gathered discontinue the journey of going back to that day, but are fuel only to add to the experience of having been effected so we can't let it slide or set it aside, but it is with us always front and center almost as if to guide us. |
