Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/13/08 at 05:10 AM Quite possibly, eh? Some good thoughts expressed here. Some well-said questions as well. |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/13/08 at 04:25 PM I like the depth to this, enjoyable descriptions of both of you. Your last stanza has a wistful feel and I can sure relate to the "hummibrd@" communication condition. |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/13/08 at 05:43 PM How you pull us with you through the history, evoking feelings of joy and admiring thoughts and then I plumet at the end falling into the sadness and remembering the disappointment I often feel with "today's manner of communication." Excellent, George. I also appreciated the subtlety. |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/15/08 at 11:22 AM your writing George always makes me feel, like I could be there, and experiencing the very thing, right there beside you.
there are many feelings here to parse through
and in so doing, well worth the effort of discovering feelings within these passages which are my very own. |