| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/08/08 at 06:43 PM Awesome. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 11/08/08 at 06:45 PM Awesome. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/08/08 at 07:36 PM Sad.....but I feel comforted in this. Nice touch. Thanks. |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 11/08/08 at 07:56 PM this feels incredibly peaceful to me. thank you. |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 11/08/08 at 10:59 PM I've read this again and again. It brings so many things to mind. |
| Posted by David Garner on 11/09/08 at 04:18 AM really really beautiful. I love the repetition of "it did not matter". |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 11/10/08 at 01:30 PM the poem is magic and nuanced and subtle and everything wonderful to behold. |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 11/10/08 at 01:32 PM Just very lovely, tender, sad, and sweet. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 11/11/08 at 07:16 PM There is a marvelous "feel" or sense of tenderness and warmth in this. |
| Posted by Kristi Paik on 11/12/08 at 05:49 PM i love how you can take this sad essence and still be warm with as well. great write |
| Posted by James Zealy on 11/12/08 at 10:07 PM A life is never lost, even when it is. beautiful write Kristina. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 03/05/09 at 04:12 PM Very sad, but sweet and touching at the same time. Excellent work! |
| Posted by Jason Moskalyk on 03/31/10 at 05:43 AM we blink and look up towards the sky anyway, always have. |
| Posted by David Hill on 04/02/11 at 03:43 AM This made me think of caring for an elderly person. There is an acceptance in this piece. |
| Posted by Gail Wolper on 08/05/14 at 07:46 AM Brilliant! |
