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Hot Chocolate

by Melissa Arel


Like a rich, sweet, and soothing cup of chocolate
you warm me from the inside, out.
Breathing your words in deeply,
causes my head to spin from the swirling heat
that rises within me.
Satisfying, and delicious, I find myself wanting more
of you.


11/04/2008

Posted on 11/04/2008
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Adrian Calhoun on 11/04/08 at 06:12 PM

Oh delicious. Isn't love a wonderful thing. Good writing, perfect for fall days.

Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 11/06/08 at 01:11 AM

Your cup runnith over.....sweet!

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 11/06/08 at 04:36 AM

Nothing like a hot cup of chocolate Mel...CharMin

Posted by Ken Harnisch on 11/06/08 at 01:48 PM

Makes me want to brew up a cup of Nestle's. Sensual and soothing, Mel

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/06/08 at 03:20 PM

A lovely cuppa here - smooth as silk.

Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/06/08 at 06:16 PM

Wonderful metaphor of love. smh

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/06/08 at 10:17 PM

Excellent romantic personfication of the title's namesake Melissa. One of my favorite drinks to sooth the soul, especially at night. :o)

Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/06/08 at 11:50 PM

delicious ... sensualness ... I love it!

Posted by Laurie Blum on 11/07/08 at 08:17 PM

One can never have too much.... chocolate or it's equivilent! Nice write.

Posted by Tim D Livingston on 11/10/08 at 06:05 PM

Sounds like some good stuff.... What a sweet read!

Posted by Katie Dean on 11/11/08 at 04:32 PM

it's the best feeling in the world and you capture it beautifully.

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