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mail call

by Kristina Woodhill

shoving letters
through mail slots
with no envelopes

i hold the book of stamps
i tell you they no longer need
a tongue

you tell me -
anyway,
the letter opener is lost

i tell you the junk mail
does not bring the winning number

you insist you can read
the invisible ink

i change the header

you flip it over
and call it
the end

08/27/2008

Posted on 08/28/2008
Copyright © 2025 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by George Hoerner on 08/28/08 at 03:41 PM

Really nice exchange Kristina. Flows quckly to the end.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/28/08 at 11:24 PM

Hi Kristina, Good write. Sounds like a busy day at the office or busy at home in the office.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/28/08 at 11:25 PM

Hi Kristina, Also quite clever writing.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/01/08 at 04:23 PM

Oh damn! What a poem. The simple title and seemingly simple subject matter crept up on me and then lept into my heart with the last stanza.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/04/08 at 04:44 PM

Wise use of metaphors and analogy Kristina that runs as deep as any letter opener.

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