|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 08/20/08 at 02:08 AM|
Superb! You've created a strong sense of motion, and the last 3 lines are perfect.
|Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/20/08 at 12:46 PM|
What a wonderful escape.
|Posted by George Hoerner on 08/20/08 at 02:31 PM|
To have sunk beneath the ocean and rise as flying fish, what more could one ask. Nice write.
|Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/20/08 at 05:06 PM|
Poems like this are what I live for to find.
|Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/20/08 at 07:33 PM|
Great sailing poem Jadi....CharMin
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/20/08 at 11:44 PM|
Makes me wish I didn't get seasick. I shall sail away on this poem - beautiful.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/21/08 at 12:42 AM|
A poetic painting both beautiful and haunting jadi.
|Posted by Anastasia Selby on 08/21/08 at 06:42 PM|
I like the image of the sheets and the use of lemurian. nice.
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/21/08 at 07:46 PM|
A beautiful escape into the imagination, makes me think of Quentin Blake.
|Posted by Wendy Sparling on 08/21/08 at 08:10 PM|
You sail like a flying fish, jadi. Your poetry always captures the essence of Nature and my attention. Hugz
|Posted by Brian Francis on 08/22/08 at 01:43 PM|
Wonderful write! Oh to be sailing again. The peace and tranquility of it all. --bf
|Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/23/08 at 01:12 PM|
Magical images. Like Rhiannon I loved the last three lines. Perfect.
|Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/24/08 at 07:49 PM|
You've taken me on a sailing trip out from Paradise. I can feel the breeze in my hair and feel the salt spray on my skin.
|Posted by Anastasia Selby on 10/24/08 at 01:55 AM|
I've read this before, and enjoyed reading it again.
|Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/02/09 at 08:59 PM|
Minutes past seven on this full moon eve poesies call my name. A heartspeak stirs in whispertone sinuates oceans inner. Like a lyricist's rhapsody serenades the divine so my breath in wonder glissades the words of Pe4ce and I Escape to Halcyon.
|Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/07/09 at 06:19 PM|
Ah, I see the name Lemuria and this piece feels like a Howard Roark elevation. Brilliant.
|Posted by Lori Johnson on 11/16/09 at 10:20 PM|
I much prefer Ambien, to each his own, I suppose. LOL It appears the results are the same, which is what matters. ;)