| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 08/20/08 at 02:08 AM Superb! You've created a strong sense of motion, and the last 3 lines are perfect. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 08/20/08 at 12:46 PM What a wonderful escape. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/20/08 at 02:31 PM To have sunk beneath the ocean and rise as flying fish, what more could one ask. Nice write. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 08/20/08 at 05:06 PM Poems like this are what I live for to find. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 08/20/08 at 07:33 PM Great sailing poem Jadi....CharMin |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/20/08 at 11:44 PM Makes me wish I didn't get seasick. I shall sail away on this poem - beautiful. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/21/08 at 12:42 AM A poetic painting both beautiful and haunting jadi. |
| Posted by Anastasia Selby on 08/21/08 at 06:42 PM I like the image of the sheets and the use of lemurian. nice. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 08/21/08 at 07:46 PM A beautiful escape into the imagination, makes me think of Quentin Blake. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 08/21/08 at 08:10 PM You sail like a flying fish, jadi. Your poetry always captures the essence of Nature and my attention. Hugz |
| Posted by Brian Francis on 08/22/08 at 01:43 PM Wonderful write! Oh to be sailing again. The peace and tranquility of it all. --bf |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/23/08 at 01:12 PM Magical images. Like Rhiannon I loved the last three lines. Perfect. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/24/08 at 07:49 PM You've taken me on a sailing trip out from Paradise. I can feel the breeze in my hair and feel the salt spray on my skin. |
| Posted by Anastasia Selby on 10/24/08 at 01:55 AM I've read this before, and enjoyed reading it again. |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/02/09 at 08:59 PM Minutes past seven on this full moon eve poesies call my name. A heartspeak stirs in whispertone sinuates oceans inner. Like a lyricist's rhapsody serenades the divine so my breath in wonder glissades the words of Pe4ce and I Escape to Halcyon.
lovelight&peace...*m.a |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 11/07/09 at 06:19 PM Ah, I see the name Lemuria and this piece feels like a Howard Roark elevation. Brilliant. |
| Posted by Lori Johnson on 11/16/09 at 10:20 PM I much prefer Ambien, to each his own, I suppose. LOL It appears the results are the same, which is what matters. ;) |
