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Cool Move

by Roger J Kenyon



A finger of fog snaked
out from a murky bog then
stood on a hollow log.
Rolling out a dizzy frog
from inside the mossy log on top of a sleeping dog. The finger of fog slunk
home to its murky bog having
caused enough commotion for
for one day with a cool move.

06/21/2008

Author's Note: I may have had a beer too many.

Posted on 06/21/2008
Copyright © 2024 Roger J Kenyon

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/21/08 at 06:43 PM

Here'e to one beer too many. I like the unpretentious playfulness of this. Well done!

Posted by Jennifer Ragan on 06/24/08 at 08:41 PM

Cool write:)

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/25/08 at 02:34 PM

hehehhehee - not enough cool moves in this world - good for the fog!

Posted by Melissa Panther on 12/27/08 at 07:43 PM

I really like the movement of this...coolness.

Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/15/09 at 04:10 AM

Congrats on POTD!

Posted by Anne Boulender on 08/15/09 at 04:43 AM

Congratulations on POTD, I agree with what Chris Sorrenti said.

Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/15/09 at 10:43 PM

This is where you bring ME: I am on a boat watching the morning wake up waiting for just the right moment to cast over to the 15 foot hold near that log where a big black bass is waiting for my bait. You hooked me on the feeling. Well done.

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