| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/01/08 at 05:24 PM ...kristina, i thought this was site was supposed to be for amateurs...mylady, i started to waltz w/ this pome, then about 8 or so lines, she started spinning and whirling me, this pome is tall, i want you to know that i'm impressed, but don't want you to know that this pome is sooooo tall it is astounding, that would sound maudlin, so i'll say that i'm envious because i love word(shortages-kind of thingee) and you wrote it instead of me...a the way you allow a few lines to "show" a whole human in a capsule...out done yourself!...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 01/01/08 at 05:26 PM ...of course, faves...peace chaz |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 01/01/08 at 06:37 PM You painted the circle wonderfully well of your New Year's still counting. Great New Year's poem! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 01/01/08 at 06:45 PM Nice group to bring in the new year with!!! Lovely descriptives, made them all alive! |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 01/01/08 at 08:14 PM We are all trickling down through the years! Nicely done. MFS |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 01/02/08 at 04:32 PM wonderful through & through! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/04/08 at 10:03 PM It's not just the poem, its how lovingly but economically described each character. This is a keeper on the Fav's list. Wish I could have been there. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/05/08 at 01:22 PM each vignette is alive with proof that there are lives which are being played out similar yet varying from our own, and the last stanza is the kicker, the match that sparks the fuel inside this vehicle and sends it reeling toward the universe which is the heart. |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 01/05/08 at 04:24 PM Yes, that calendar which none escape and that circle of friends of life encompassing us all. Very well done. |
