Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Brian Francis on 12/19/07 at 10:31 PM LMAO I love it Dave. Great write. --bf |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/20/07 at 04:16 AM Very funny Christmas eve! Poor Santa!! |
Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 12/20/07 at 05:58 AM This is hilarious, Dave! I can just imagine the illustrations for this if made into a kid's (adult's) storybook! The image of Santa blowing the gifts right off the sleigh? = Priceless! :) |
Posted by Alisa Js on 12/20/07 at 08:21 AM lol.. this one is just way toooo cute.. aloha..and Happy holidays to you.... from out here, this side of paradise.. alisa ;-) |
Posted by Wendy Sparling on 12/21/07 at 08:27 PM HeHe!! Poor Santa indeed! This poem enlighened my day. |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/23/07 at 03:15 PM A wonderful touch of humor for this festive season Dave. And how the times have changed; imagine Santa getting pulled over for DWI! :o) |
Posted by A. Paige White on 12/23/07 at 05:53 PM Leaves me chuckling and grinning. Great read! |
Posted by A. Paige White on 12/24/07 at 03:25 PM Congratulations on POTD on Christmas Eve!
Still chuckle when I read it! |
Posted by Wendy Sparling on 12/24/07 at 05:45 PM Congrats on your POTD, Dave!!! |
Posted by Charles E Minshall on 12/24/07 at 05:45 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Dave.
What a terrible job for Santa
When he has the flu.
All the children waiting,
And he's long overdue.
This brought me a smile. Thanks....Charlie |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 12/25/07 at 02:39 AM Congratulations Dave on winning 2nd place in the contest and for POTD on Christmas Eve. This is one very funny poem.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/25/07 at 09:09 AM How did I miss this wonderful Christmas poem. This is so appropriate for my first read of Christmas morning. May you and yours have the merriest Christmas and happy reindeer! Cheers! |
Posted by JD Clay on 01/05/08 at 06:33 PM This one has happiness written all over it, Dave. Congratulations on POTD and your success in the Holiday Poetry Contest! |
Posted by Glenn Currier on 12/26/09 at 05:58 PM I am sooooooo glad I found this one the day after Christmas 2009. I wish I had found it two days before so I could share it with others to make the day even brighter than it was. Thanks for this peek into that little boyDave. |