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chocolate cake in the dark
by Mary Frances Spencera bunch of poets
savoring slices
chocolate cake
in the dark
somehow smacks of
guilt-free decadence
taste
creamy rich
luxurious
on lips
sweet
our pens
swirl
saturday afternoon workshop
in a dimly lit
back room
we are
writing
about
women
11/25/2007
Author's Note:
Inspired by actual events! MFS
Posted on 11/26/2007
Copyright © 2024 Mary Frances Spencer
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/26/07 at 03:28 PM If it concerns chocolate, write me in, please!! |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 11/26/07 at 04:44 PM Well done! I loved the vivid succinctness of this..... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/26/07 at 05:31 PM Mmmm...chocolate cake...my favourite. Yup, men like it too! |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/27/07 at 05:54 AM poets, chocolate, pens, swirls... all kinds of possibilities there and then mix in that female energy and it becomes downright volatile. Evocative poem, Mary Frances. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 07/09/11 at 06:20 AM Poetry + Chocolate cake = awesomeness!! |
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