| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/16/07 at 05:28 PM beautifully secreted, full of tantalizing, exotic, seductive imagery, hidden deeply "under cover" ... in my favorites. |
| Posted by Mary Frances Spencer on 11/16/07 at 05:47 PM Love "boa's feathered tickle"! Sweet! MFS |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 11/16/07 at 06:15 PM I love the way you have trimmed each dream-image to sensualspeak all that one will never 'see' and yet one does ... under cover ... sublime, the kiss! ... *m.a |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 11/16/07 at 06:43 PM Mercy! I had to find a paper towel to wipe the steam from my screen to reply. This is awesome. Makes my previous antsy for 5:00 seem smothered. Wonderful writing! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/16/07 at 07:29 PM In other words, no cameras or better "keep it private." Wonderfully expressed through carefully chosen and constructed poetics. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 11/16/07 at 10:27 PM Amen. It should need no spotlights or directors or players crying "cut." Thank you for this reminder, Kristina. |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 11/17/07 at 04:22 AM Nicely turned - I really like how you defiantly deny us the keyhole and yet let us imagine with sensual imagery - provocative yet demure - great imagery too.... d:-) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/24/07 at 06:04 AM My favorite lines: "seal again this vow of we/
away from scrutiny" Bruce said it best. The translucent veil you place over your intimacy invites us in just far enough to whet the imagination. Well done. |
