| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/10/07 at 11:42 PM Poor Antwerp. Guess he learned never to come between a man and his chocolate.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Graeme Fielden on 10/11/07 at 12:58 AM too funny, Charlie... Poor Antwerp... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/11/07 at 01:25 AM LOL!! Got what was coming to him and it wasn't the cake! |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 10/11/07 at 04:46 AM Heh. Kick ass. |
| Posted by Anne Engelen on 10/11/07 at 07:20 AM hahaha, witty author's note!! |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 10/12/07 at 06:04 PM what? —you've gone and warped Antwerp?
I would like a taste of that chocolate cake, btw!
ChArLie, you always know how to bring a smile into here! :) Jill |
| Posted by Julie Adams on 10/12/07 at 09:29 PM reading your poetry always brings a warm smile to my face...your antics are adorable (pun intended)...peace, jewels |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 10/13/07 at 03:07 PM This is fabulously funny!! and I love the anty pesto p.s. hehehehhehhehehe |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 10/14/07 at 01:56 AM Well just watch out for his cousin pasto, Charlie--he comes from a big Antwerpian family of many generations. Glorious fun. |
| Posted by David R Spellman on 10/14/07 at 01:31 PM Clever and humorous as always Charles - love it! |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 10/15/07 at 02:52 AM Ah.... someone passionate about their chocolate! I think I have an Auntie Pesto....weird...lol. |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 10/15/07 at 02:54 PM Ha! Always such a joy to read something from you. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 10/15/07 at 05:35 PM You certainlty know how to stomp out some cool poetry, Charlie.
I like you whimsical style.
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| Posted by Brian Francis on 10/16/07 at 04:40 AM Sounds like he had high hopes. Should have stuck to rubber tree plants. Great poem!!
--bf
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| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 10/16/07 at 02:58 PM I guess your 170lb (or so) self showed that ant's 1/10th of an ounce self who was boss! (You should be ashamed of yourself, picking on a creature so tiny and being proud of it!!!) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 10/17/07 at 12:49 AM congrats on this poem being #1 this week. that ant had no chance, and you are reaping the benefits.. hehehe.. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/17/07 at 06:45 PM When all their individual contributions are added up, ants constitute up to 15 to 25% of the total terrestrial animal biomass...so individuality is rare, Antwerp seems to have left his...ah, mark...so to speak. Much fun Charlie, Thanks. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 10/17/07 at 11:07 PM He got his just desserts! Great write :) |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 11/25/07 at 03:13 PM Especially appropriate at this holiday season with all kinds of temptations for both pests and people... Good laugh... needed on this gloomy and cold Houston morn... |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 03/27/08 at 07:29 AM The only thing I can say about your writing is I wish you would write more. I love your work!!!! |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 05/10/08 at 07:14 PM Hi Charlie,
Great write. Poor little feller, he never had a chance. Guess the chocolate cake got the best of him, he had to have it. |
