| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/14/07 at 03:49 AM What's not to like about this? Especially the first stanza. Great images, great lines. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 09/14/07 at 08:42 AM This one gave me all kinds of images. I feel the need to wash my hands. Powerful images from the use of "syrup" and all its charactersistics... |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 09/18/07 at 03:45 AM Sometimes words are so delicious they leave me speechless and hungering at the same time. This is one of those times. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 10/06/07 at 11:05 AM this poem is so tender and loving and artful and a delight to read, as it offers those two tidbits of delectable surprises at the end -----like commas. |
| Posted by Carolyn Coville on 11/07/07 at 04:14 AM mmmm absolutely delicious! |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 11/10/07 at 02:05 AM oh, sigh... such is the poetic life... I feel like this all the time...you have said it so well!
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/21/09 at 04:54 PM Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 01/21/09 at 05:38 PM Congratulations. Great write. |
| Posted by Meghan Helmich on 01/21/09 at 07:59 PM congrats on potd. that last stanza is a very good one. might i suggest dropping the 'like' in the title? anything can be 'like' syrup...i want you to TELL me that the words are syrup ;) |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 01/21/09 at 08:04 PM Wow! Mel. Congratulations on poem of the day.
Very sweet.....CharMin |
| Posted by Ken Harnisch on 01/21/09 at 10:11 PM Sweeter the second time around..Congrats on a well-chosen POTD, Mel |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 01/22/09 at 12:43 AM YAY Mel!!!!! Congrats on POTD. Totally love every inch of this piece. :) |
| Posted by Maria Massarella on 01/22/09 at 02:04 PM Congratulations on POTD! Mel, your words are maple-syrup-sweet. luscious... |
| Posted by Jolie Jordan on 05/19/15 at 12:21 AM Whoa, this rules. It's sexy in a sapiosexual kinda way. |
