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this moment in time
by Melissa Arelthis moment in time
is where i want to be
amongst the trees and the leaves
listening to them breathe;
watching them sway and dance, i see
them bend forward to a breeze
ever so graciously.
strong and proud yet gentle and kind
i am theirs and they are mine.
09/11/2007 Author's Note: gotcha K! ;o)
Posted on 09/12/2007
Copyright © 2024 Melissa Arel
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 09/12/07 at 03:09 AM I like being in a moment like that and knowing it, too. Makes it that much better. Very well done indeed. |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/13/07 at 03:25 PM ...melissa, what a delightful statement...'appreciatin' the right and right now as an acceptable cosmic USDA stamp...lovely, peace, chaz and congrats on POTD...deserved. |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 09/13/07 at 06:09 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Mel....Charlie |
| Posted by Richard Vince on 09/13/07 at 06:09 PM a beautiful moment, beautifully captured. reminds me that i should make more of an effort to experience and enjoy such snatches of serenity. great choice for POTD. thank you for writing it. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/14/07 at 01:09 AM Your description is delicately and beautifully written. Congratulations on your POTD. |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 09/14/07 at 03:15 AM Being apart of nature is always refreshing and calming. CONGRATULATIONS on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/16/07 at 05:31 PM I see some of myself in this poem, as I too love to watch trees sway back and forth in the wind with a life of their own. :o) |
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