| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 05/19/07 at 01:33 AM This was wonderful Laura! The title got my laughter going and your lyrical spherical verses kept my giggles in time with your rhyme. Love it! |
| Posted by Morgan D Hafele on 05/19/07 at 01:43 AM hahaha, i think the funniest part is that i'm trying right now not to eat a poet... i think that sort of makes sense right? this piece is fantastical! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 05/19/07 at 10:57 AM Fantastic!!! I've wanted to write a poem with "pseudonymph" in it...you beat me to it. I really enjoyed your semantics and rhyme. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/19/07 at 02:30 PM This is a fine romp from title to the munchies at the end!!! I love the beat, the laughing at oneself, the fantasy of it all!! Well done! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 05/20/07 at 07:27 PM I would love to see this done out loud on a poetry jam!! What a write! |
| Posted by Rachelle Howe on 05/21/07 at 04:09 PM A meg, a mic, and a backup band... |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 05/22/07 at 02:21 PM Muwahahahahahahahaha.
I want to see this done out loud, too. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/24/07 at 10:56 AM it tickles the bones of my fancy to imagine a fantastical poet being eaten who was not particularly fond or aware of its being on the menu and then with the order finding itself on the plate, then on the palate and then and then .............
this poem pounds the beat like Moliere, who would be proud to have assembled this fine feasting of words onto our palate, the fine lineage and vintage of which it is advisable we all take to our hearts and munch.
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| Posted by Max Bouillet on 01/22/08 at 01:10 AM I wouldn't worry about this poet's fate.
This poet will arrive even if a bit late.
For the persona you created so impromptu
you'll find sometime later all covered in poo.
Ask not for whom the bowl flushes...
it flushes for you.
Sorry for my childish humor! |
| Posted by Rhiannon Jones on 03/26/08 at 11:44 AM Congrats, Laura, for this well-deserved POTD. This one still cracks me up....priceless! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 03/26/08 at 12:23 PM Congratulations on poem of the day Laura.
Fun to read......CharMin |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/26/08 at 03:19 PM Great to see this as POTD! |
| Posted by Kristine Briese on 03/26/08 at 05:29 PM Remarkable and fun piece of work! |
| Posted by Alex Smyth on 03/26/08 at 09:19 PM Bravo bravo!! Genuine word play at it's finest! Magnificent and hearty congratulations on POTD. |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 03/26/08 at 10:00 PM *joy lighting up my eyes* how cool this. you inspire and delight! :) |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 03/26/08 at 11:49 PM Still love it!
Knew to get out a bib for my drool
sure to drib rivulets in your school
of aural mood
feasting again 'pon the poet Laura ate
looking so fabulous on what a poet's plate...
Wonderful to see it as POTD! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 03/27/08 at 07:55 PM I delighted in pondering this one - much to think about beween the clever rhymes and lines... |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 03/31/08 at 02:50 PM ...laura, just take me back to my seat, it was a wonderful dance and now...i missed this in 07 and so glad i see it now...i chew words and you got some here[that i love]...good write and rhyme...charlie |
| Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/01/08 at 03:45 AM
* m o r e ! *
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| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/01/08 at 02:07 PM Excellent hip hop lyrics Laura. And a very witty title also to introduce it. |
| Posted by LK Barrett on 05/23/09 at 03:54 PM some times you can have too much fun...fortunately, this was just enough...ty, miss doom, for the ear-full...lk |
| Posted by Ulyss Rubey on 06/25/10 at 10:38 PM "self restraint get the munchies and swallows the dream" Love it. |
