| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 04/18/07 at 08:31 PM Like night and day the changes happen seemingly gradually but more in a flash, so fragile so magical so sudden the eye cannot catch the feeling, the heart cannot skip a beat, try not to blink... keep breathing... the spark of life happens in the gap... you've made one here. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 04/18/07 at 10:32 PM Amen! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 04/19/07 at 01:23 AM I say - let them shine on me at will!! Fun to escape into your world for a moment.. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 04/19/07 at 02:07 AM what a lovely picture.. so peaceful.. i wish i could live in this world of yours :) |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 04/19/07 at 02:48 AM How eloquent and visually impressive! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/19/07 at 04:48 PM Nifty play of words, shapes and color Jill. :o) |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/19/07 at 11:17 PM A message worth reflecting on whilst at play :) Creative as always Jill :) |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/20/07 at 02:49 PM This piece is creative beyond words. I am absolutely fascinated by it! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 04/21/07 at 05:46 PM Jill, you are so incredibly talented. I wish you could teach me how to do things like this. Yes, the moon brightens the dark corners of my life, just as you say. Let her escape with my life, since I feel sister to the moon. In your own way, you brighten others' lives with your starshine. Shine on. Bless you.
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 04/24/07 at 08:51 AM Not only is this talented as a work of art but the words say much. You say it best when you say nothing at all! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 04/24/07 at 06:57 PM ...elizabeth, this pome sucks.......the very meaning out of life itself...so issa, so soto, so cisneros, so langston hughes, so francisco goldman...melady, this is a pome that not only walks, it struts...wished i'd penned it...wonderful!!!...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 04/30/07 at 12:00 PM sometimes I wish it would. the moon I mean, abscond with my life or rather add whatever ever is brilling in me to its own. and it goes without saying, this poem beams. |
| Posted by Anita Mac on 06/14/07 at 04:30 AM This is simply a beautiful bit even without all the special effects... |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/18/08 at 02:45 AM I got a jillion kicks out of this one...CharMin |
