| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Angela Nuzzo on 02/26/07 at 11:09 AM What an image, Genevieve! And you've created an entire scene with emotions, just in 3 lines. Very nice. |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/27/07 at 03:22 AM how hilarious! this is great! you really have captured a great scene! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/27/07 at 05:45 PM YUCK! But certainly carries that haiku impact. |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 03/01/07 at 10:06 PM hee hee |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 03/02/07 at 05:03 PM Oh my, Genevieve, I wasn't expecting that last line ... but it gave this ku exactly what it needed -- spirit and emotion. Excellent. :) |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 03/03/07 at 03:57 AM lol!....lol!!! I can see it in my mind's eye...lol!!! |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/15/07 at 05:47 PM LOL |
| Posted by Charles M Harrison on 12/26/07 at 01:49 AM That gave me a chuckle, I needed one right now. |
