| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/25/07 at 07:42 AM What an incredibly beautiful soul serenade full of love and music from deep within.... thank you for sharing this with us out here.. aloha..;-0 |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 02/25/07 at 10:13 AM Besutiful Genevieve, simply beautiful, both lyrically and visually. |
| Posted by A. Paige White on 02/25/07 at 01:23 PM Amazing! When I first looked at this, I thought our local weather had shaped itself in words through a quill onto a page. We had terrible weather last night. Tornadoes everywhere so looking at it as a whole immediately flashed "tornado!" like my beside clock was flashing of time stopped... I love the presentation of caressed femininity with these shapes! |
| Posted by Amy Wustrin on 02/25/07 at 09:08 PM What a beautiful sentiment, expressed so perfectly |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/27/07 at 04:04 AM oh, i love this! what a beautiful piece :) |
| Posted by Peter Humphreys on 02/28/07 at 05:49 PM This is so beautiful in form, sentiment and poetry. |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 03/01/07 at 07:44 PM Wonderful. |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 03/01/07 at 10:08 PM Fantastic how you reinforce the main thesis of your poem within a concrete form. Well done. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 03/05/07 at 04:38 AM I really like the shapes of the stanzas as you reinforce how this person makes you feel, and that small is a good thing. ;) I like how you describe how well you both fit together. Makes me smile... Thank you. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 03/19/07 at 03:29 AM Hi Genevieve,
This is so beauitful. Great write.
sweet. Me likes the way ya did it too. Different. :) |
| Posted by Melissa Arel on 08/15/07 at 05:36 PM aww i loved this! |
| Posted by Melissa Panther on 10/03/08 at 03:30 AM What a beautiful love, what a lovely expression. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 02/27/09 at 02:52 PM so beautiful and creative- love the shape of the stanzas. I am small(5')- nothing makes me feel tall! excellent read- perfectly done |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 10/05/09 at 05:02 PM ...k-gal, i love this. tight. |
| Posted by Mo Couts on 06/15/11 at 02:28 PM This is positively delightful! |
