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That Last Nerve
by Rhonda Maneki
You know that last twitching nerve,
that last, very last twitching nerve?
That I have...That one,
absolutely, grating nerve?
You're standing on it!
02/16/2007
Author's Note: You know, when the pot on the stove boils over and the doorbell rings, the phone rings and a salesman won't get off the phone.*screams* *lol*
Posted on 02/17/2007
Copyright © 2024 Rhonda Maneki
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 02/17/07 at 06:52 AM !!!!LOL!!!!! only standing???....!!!!LOL!!!! too cute and funny, Rhonda...;-0 |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 02/17/07 at 05:12 PM Hip Hip Hooray! I've found a poem that demonstrates how some days affect me. :) |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/20/07 at 02:18 PM LOL very, very good. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 02/20/07 at 02:18 PM Gone into my Favourites |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 06/28/08 at 02:02 PM And Congrats on POTD !!! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 06/28/08 at 02:20 PM Ha! Congrats on POTD! I can so relate. Thanks! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/28/08 at 04:09 PM Witty use of repetition and drama; well done! And congrats on POTD. |
| Posted by Carol Grant on 08/07/10 at 12:16 AM I loved this. I will say to someone see that thing tailing along behind me. They will look and look back at me. No I don't they say. Well I say you probably can not see it but it is my last nerve and your stepping close to it. LOL...nice write thank you for making me giggle right out loud, Rhonda |
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