| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gabriel Ricard on 02/14/07 at 07:25 PM Fascinating and beautiful, to say the least. I really, really like this. |
| Posted by Soulo Jacob Bourgeau on 02/14/07 at 07:39 PM Wow. This is just...wow. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 02/14/07 at 07:51 PM Lovely Jill. And yes, "what next to do...." You are always an inspiration. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 02/15/07 at 02:46 AM Such a magical world you let us view behind this veil that covers you... Lovely, my friend! |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 02/15/07 at 08:16 PM such beautiful mystery! thank you for posting it! |
| Posted by JD Clay on 02/17/07 at 06:37 PM I felt Cupid’s arrow behind this veil in symbol font. A very cool Valentine in any language. Especially yours! I'd recognize those eyes anywhere. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 03/13/07 at 04:39 PM Goes without saying, visually this a most attractive poem. You've sparked my curiosity as to what it means. |
| Posted by Laura Doom on 04/15/07 at 12:10 AM Yes, so deep, and the 'translation' a seductively light touch eliciting a veiled smile from my dawn-broken eyes :) Ah Jill, you mesmerise... |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 07/10/07 at 07:56 PM Exotic! In this case where I do not know the language, the picture with the English title is worth all the poetry words . Formatting very attractive as well. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/28/07 at 04:42 PM Hi Elizabeth,
This one is quite different also from your works. It's lovely. Ya got me on this one, I don't know the language. Lovely picture too. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 12/16/09 at 09:09 PM Just found this one- glad I did- nice job! |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 07/13/10 at 12:18 PM what a lovely impacting in the soul. what is not to adore about this poem, even in my sleep? |
