| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 01/30/07 at 07:41 PM Delightful, Kristina! A wonderful story that just kind of "tumbles" out with the chosen form. Thanks. |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 01/30/07 at 11:00 PM A kiss-and-tell poem, (giggle) slightly delayed, and yes, delightfully teasing and retrospectively insightful with a light touch and a rhythmic playfulness! |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 01/31/07 at 05:58 AM what an interesting piece! we do tend to view the past from one perspective, forgetting details and whatnot.. |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 01/31/07 at 02:14 PM This made me belly-chuckle... love the form - it added the feeling of simplicity to it with the short lines being allowed their moment... like the kiss. I also love the perspective of it. |
| Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 02/01/07 at 01:09 PM I think Kristina, you have more or less described how the process of recollection and writing works, in just this manner, which is as fine a patchwork as they come and never too late the quilt or too soon, the moon is full and turning as wide and as free as a mane o'er a shoulder. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/01/07 at 07:03 PM I do see the irony that does lend itself to a kind of humour here, as you express it in the story telling and emphasize the fact with the repeated line. Well done. |
| Posted by Scott Utley on 02/02/07 at 04:09 AM I wish I had written this. |
