| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 01/26/07 at 04:15 PM Ah, yes, thank god for the electronic psychiatrist! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 01/28/07 at 02:59 AM Chris I love this. Except for the cigarette part, I can sure identify. Aren't we all just a bit addicted to the keyboard madness?
~Chelle~
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| Posted by Christel Crews on 01/29/07 at 04:40 AM oh, i know this feeling all too well! "he birthplace of accomplishment-inactivity’s and restless’ unwanted child" -- what an incredible line! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 01/29/07 at 12:31 PM This piece rings so true. Loved it! Very well expressed and written. Great work! |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 05/08/07 at 04:40 PM "...never on one channel very long
each an uncomfortable reminder
in how lacking of life I am
though not worried
having been here before
the birthplace of accomplishment ..." ... Yes, I've been exploring your library, Chris. I felt that these lines expressed something much deeper than the "electronic psychiatrist." Sadness and depression are the undertones of this poem, but you marvelously led us away from such and turned it amusingly honest. Great write. :) |
