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surfacing

by Kristina Woodhill

soap on skin on skin
dissolving surface tension
resolve to buy soap

01/03/2007

Posted on 01/03/2007
Copyright © 2024 Kristina Woodhill

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Peter Humphreys on 01/04/07 at 10:59 PM

Expect soap sales to increase forthwith!

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 01/06/07 at 04:22 PM

I like how the text adds a whole new meaning to the title. Well done Kris!

Posted by Cristy M. on 01/06/07 at 05:50 PM

ah, yes. divine domesticity.

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 01/08/07 at 01:12 PM

delightful little ditty, Kristina in whose quick lathering all of us with dirty eyes all laved.

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