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A Thought Process
by Alisa Js
A thought blows by and hesitates
Ponders for a bit,
Is there a place I need to be
Within this silent viewing
Of images perceived ...
Or do I continue on my path
Up and around
These cerebral trails,
Where to stop and linger
How to know for sure
Unless first drawn
By that magnetic charge
Doomed to wander
aimlessly ...
Without a place to give me purpose
Inside this land
of endless possibilities ..
02/28/2006 Posted on 12/27/2006
Copyright © 2024 Alisa Js
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 12/27/06 at 04:41 AM Alisa, oh yes, where to stop and ponder? Wandering aimlessly in one's own mind is something I do a lot of lately. :) Yet the thought of knowing their are endless possibilities keeps us going, yes? If I ever learned how to split atoms like a chunk of wood, I'd have it made. Yet, my mind wanders ... then lingers for a bit ... then looks for more. Great poem. peace and love ... |
| Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 12/28/06 at 03:38 AM An intersting perspective and topic, put in the mouth of a thought. That is a thought talking, I say to myself. Trying to find a way of connecting to "images percieved". They do not always come paired, the mind wandering its own way as the world goes by...ah, but the "magnetic charge" that really satisfies and ignites meaning. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 12/28/06 at 03:23 PM Worthy description of the creative process. Many possible routes to take, while at the same time following one's heart. |
| Posted by Tony Whitaker on 12/28/06 at 05:27 PM A word I use a lot in my own writing - ponder. It says more than to think, don't you think?
Another great one Alisa and now in my favorites! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 12/28/06 at 05:42 PM I like this a lot! |
| Posted by Steve Baba on 12/14/08 at 03:05 AM Excellent poem Alisa. I really enjoyed reading this one. |
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