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Hydrogen Hip Hop Dancer
by Gregory R SchelskeYou groove among the planets-
A stellar disco star.
Hydrogen hip-hop dancer;
Moody celestial dame-
Solar systems in your pockets,
Asteroids in your veins.
11/03/2006 Posted on 11/03/2006
Copyright © 2024 Gregory R Schelske
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/03/06 at 06:44 PM Cool! |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 11/03/06 at 08:56 PM It's got a beat she can dance to. I like the rythm of this and the wording. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 07/17/11 at 07:06 PM As a fellow poet who sometimes employs "space" imagery in his own work, I realy enjoyed the celestial impact of this short but snappy piece Gregory. Excellent choice for POTD. Adds to his favourites. :o) |
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