| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Shonda Creemer on 09/24/06 at 08:37 PM This piece took my breath away! Simply elegant. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/24/06 at 10:32 PM This piece is beautiful and very vivid. I loved the picture you painted of the wind. I also really liked the personification of WIND- excellent write and very enjoyable read. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/25/06 at 01:07 AM Such a gentle touch to this one - soft as a whisper. Nice! |
| Posted by Maria Terezia Ferencz on 09/25/06 at 04:35 AM This is so breathlessly romantic, I loved it..... |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/26/06 at 06:32 PM Hi Tony. I'll just say, I love this! My potd suggestion. Thanks. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/27/06 at 02:37 PM Excellent, loved it. |
| Posted by Jean Mollett on 09/29/06 at 05:22 AM Hi Tony,
It's lovely. It has it's own beauty within. The wind sure can stir up alot of things. :) |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/30/06 at 05:19 PM Beautiful poem which is beautifully written, Tony. The last stanza made me smile, and I felt the wind's kiss on my own bare shoulders. :) |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/30/06 at 11:28 PM Excellent poetics...expression! A wonderful seasonal twirl and extended metaphor to be sure. Wish I had written this...glad you did! |
| Posted by Ariane Scott on 10/01/06 at 05:58 AM this piece is so delicate, I want to wrap it in a lace hankerchief and tuck it away somewhere, hidden. I do like the rep. of "whispered" in all three stanzas-- this is very effective. And the rhyme is interesting-- I particularly like your use of slant rhyme. nice. |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/04/06 at 01:30 AM Lovely personification. Attractive format. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 11/23/06 at 02:12 PM Congrats on POTD! Very much deserved!! |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 11/24/06 at 12:51 AM Excellent potd. Congrats Tony! |
| Posted by Alison McKenzie on 04/07/07 at 08:39 PM I love the wind, for it caresses, without judgment, both the lovely and unlovely. All that is required is to show up when it's whispering. Beautiful imagery here. |
| Posted by Wendy Sparling on 03/06/08 at 11:39 PM Simply Lovely. I'm a little late but congrats on your POTD. |
