| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/17/06 at 08:34 PM You speak volumes in a few lines. The last line really draws a vivid picture in my mind! |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/17/06 at 11:40 PM Subtle but revealing, like an intimate whisper. I like this. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/22/06 at 12:39 PM Great job David, loved the line "which my eyes could not help but graze". As Quentin said, this says so much in so few lines. |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/25/06 at 12:58 AM Much is left to our imagination here, which I like. I also love the colors contrasting with your blush. This has a subtle sensual feel about it. Nicely done. |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/25/06 at 12:22 PM Excellent combination of colours Dave, easily forming a clear picture on the canvas of the mind. |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/26/06 at 06:28 PM Hi David. This little poem is a true gem. Enjoyed it! Thanks. |
| Posted by Agnes Eva on 09/30/06 at 07:09 PM it's like a Renoir, or better yet a Degas. lovely. |
| Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 10/25/06 at 04:54 AM wonderfully written- your expression is deliberate and snug:) |
