|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 09/17/06 at 08:34 PM|
You speak volumes in a few lines. The last line really draws a vivid picture in my mind!
|Posted by Mara Meade on 09/17/06 at 11:40 PM|
Subtle but revealing, like an intimate whisper. I like this.
|Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 09/22/06 at 12:39 PM|
Great job David, loved the line "which my eyes could not help but graze". As Quentin said, this says so much in so few lines.
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 09/25/06 at 12:58 AM|
Much is left to our imagination here, which I like. I also love the colors contrasting with your blush. This has a subtle sensual feel about it. Nicely done.
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/25/06 at 12:22 PM|
Excellent combination of colours Dave, easily forming a clear picture on the canvas of the mind.
|Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 09/26/06 at 06:28 PM|
Hi David. This little poem is a true gem. Enjoyed it! Thanks.
|Posted by Agnes Eva on 09/30/06 at 07:09 PM|
it's like a Renoir, or better yet a Degas. lovely.
|Posted by Gabrielle L Gervais on 10/25/06 at 04:54 AM|
wonderfully written- your expression is deliberate and snug:)