Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 09/02/06 at 05:36 PM The imagery in this poem is amazing, Tony. I could almost picture myself walking away from a gravesite. |
Posted by Deborah Breuer on 09/02/06 at 08:16 PM Nicely done...thanks
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Posted by Joan Serratelli on 09/03/06 at 06:23 PM I agree with the above comments. A very vivid drawn here; excellently drawn with words. I could see the scene unfold. Beautifully executed. |
Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 10/04/06 at 01:32 AM Striking description of a visit to a gravesite. I was able to relate to this quite well!! |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 11/06/06 at 01:53 AM Really a fine description of this moment at a gravesite. I like the use of blue and blood red as the colors here - a stark contrast to the "cuffs and collar white". I admire the brevity of this piece which feels very complete with the visitor tipping his hat and walking away. Thank you! |
Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 11/15/06 at 03:12 PM Nifty poem...catchy message...excellent flow! |