| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/31/06 at 01:40 AM Lovely rhyme - this feels like a pure place to be, soul to soul... |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 08/31/06 at 03:18 PM I agee with the comments above- lovely piece. Excellently articulated! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/01/06 at 02:53 PM Nicely captures how a couple compliments one another, both physically and metally. Thanks also for your comment on my Dentistry poem. :o) |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/02/06 at 06:48 PM yes, YES, this is exactly how it feels...i SO love the opening --Let's lick off
all lust of we...yes, strip it down to the core...i get it and i love it!! POTD, please!!! PK |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/04/06 at 02:08 AM Wow! The depth and dimension of this poem makes it far bigger than a dozen lines. I sense two bodies tangled, two hearts beating in syncopation and appreciation, two soul photosynthesizing one another creating oxygen the rest of us can breathe. Excellent excellent! |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/05/06 at 03:03 PM ...maria, you make me wanna smoke when you write these feelings, mucho goodo, beatimous...melady, peace, chaz |
| Posted by Mara Meade on 09/05/06 at 08:13 PM I like the way you bring two senses into this... and make it sensual. Mmmmmm, yes. |
| Posted by Delilah Coyne on 09/07/06 at 02:39 PM A very fluid piece. Nicely done and very sensual. |
| Posted by Anya Kaats on 02/23/12 at 02:07 PM yes, i agree, very fluid. i very beautiful read. |
