|Member Comments on this Poem|
|Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/31/06 at 01:40 AM|
Lovely rhyme - this feels like a pure place to be, soul to soul...
|Posted by Joan Serratelli on 08/31/06 at 03:18 PM|
I agee with the comments above- lovely piece. Excellently articulated!
|Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 09/01/06 at 02:53 PM|
Nicely captures how a couple compliments one another, both physically and metally. Thanks also for your comment on my Dentistry poem. :o)
|Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/02/06 at 06:48 PM|
yes, YES, this is exactly how it feels...i SO love the opening --Let's lick off
all lust of we...yes, strip it down to the core...i get it and i love it!! POTD, please!!! PK
|Posted by Glenn Currier on 09/04/06 at 02:08 AM|
Wow! The depth and dimension of this poem makes it far bigger than a dozen lines. I sense two bodies tangled, two hearts beating in syncopation and appreciation, two soul photosynthesizing one another creating oxygen the rest of us can breathe. Excellent excellent!
|Posted by Charlie Morgan on 09/05/06 at 03:03 PM|
...maria, you make me wanna smoke when you write these feelings, mucho goodo, beatimous...melady, peace, chaz
|Posted by Mara Meade on 09/05/06 at 08:13 PM|
I like the way you bring two senses into this... and make it sensual. Mmmmmm, yes.
|Posted by Delilah Coyne on 09/07/06 at 02:39 PM|
A very fluid piece. Nicely done and very sensual.
|Posted by Anya Kaats on 02/23/12 at 02:07 PM|
yes, i agree, very fluid. i very beautiful read.