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by Glenn Currier

a drop of water falls from my pen

ripples across the dusty surface

angling downward

with a mind of its own.

 

an orange leaf falls from the elm

and just above the ground

spreads its monarch wings

and takes flight

defying logic.

08/27/2006

Posted on 08/27/2006
Copyright © 2026 Glenn Currier

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/28/06 at 02:02 AM

I'm with Paul - more, please. Your creative words lift me up.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 08/30/06 at 12:54 AM

Two highly evocative poetic snapshots Glenn. I especially like the idea of the drop of water with a mind of its own, but then so does the orange leaf.

Posted by JD Clay on 09/02/06 at 05:49 AM

You know your thoughts become profound when they contain no unnecessary words. It seems as though every letter has fallen into place here Glenn. What I really like is your physical and spiritual confrontation with the elements.

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