| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Christel Crews on 05/27/06 at 05:44 PM what an incredible journey... and to cross such a bridge that every person crosses at some point in their lives... this piece is beautifully written! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/28/06 at 01:08 PM Good reminder that we cross many bridges during our stay here on earth, some personal, as in friendships and romances, graduations, others, more as a species, such as 9-11. I liked this line also: Good loses all meaning In the absence of evil.
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| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/28/06 at 03:12 PM Existence in the purest sense - beautifully written! |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 05/28/06 at 06:12 PM Thought-provoking, as well as heartwarming. My favourite stanza - Inapplicable are concepts in this land Relative to human nature Good loses all meaning
In the absence of evil. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/29/06 at 12:31 PM Absolutely beautiful poem- such an eloquently expressed affirmation of love. So well written. Just perfect! |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/29/06 at 12:31 PM Absolutely beautiful poem- such an eloquently expressed affirmation of love. So well written. Just perfect! |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 05/30/06 at 11:59 AM And you have crossed another bridge by having this become No. 1. Congrats Ashok. :o) |
| Posted by Kate Demeree on 05/31/06 at 12:11 PM *soft smile*... easy to see why this made #1 *hugs* MBF I think I will print this |
| Posted by Jared Fladeland on 08/16/06 at 04:25 AM "Good loses all meaning in the absence of evil".... that's such a powerful statement. and true. |
| Posted by Junemarie Roldan on 09/18/06 at 11:08 PM A paean to love and an absolutely life afirming write. Kudos on hitting #1 also. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 07/24/09 at 05:08 AM The ultimate frolic - unburdened by self - bathed and engulfed in light. Human meaning irrelevant except as a temporal marker. Your poem flows - a deep river. |
