Member Comments on this Poem |
Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/23/06 at 03:45 AM I love all four. The title of the second makes me grin - very clever. DB II is my fav - "to fill the halls of their hearts for the palace ahead"... |
Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 05/23/06 at 01:33 PM Wowie Zowie ~ wonderful to read. I love'm all, and also especially • Domestic Bliss ll •
I love coming into your library! |
Posted by Julie Adams on 05/23/06 at 04:57 PM though I sound as an echo, the DB II is a favorite for me, though Bad News is insightful, and DB I makes me smile...well done Chris, peace, *jewels* |
Posted by Maureen Glaude on 05/23/06 at 05:10 PM these are wonderful, Chris. So meditative. |
Posted by Michelle Angelini on 05/26/06 at 06:32 PM Got a good laugh out of these. Wonderful Chris! I may not be a housewife, but Domestic Bliss I certainly describes me.
~Chelle~ |
Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/27/06 at 10:42 AM these Haikus go beyond the pleasure principle, they are soulful and dig and groove and pump and lend sacred blood to a poet's heart. |
Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 05/27/06 at 03:07 PM No favourite - they're all wonderful. Quality writing, Chris |
Posted by Rula Shin on 05/27/06 at 10:38 PM Yes, it's MEANING which serves LIFE most...that's what I saw. Well done as always. |
Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 05/27/06 at 11:18 PM I enjoyed these short pieces, especially the last which is a real pearl of wisdom.... d:-) |
Posted by Ashok Sharda on 05/28/06 at 05:22 AM Yes, the 'domestic bliss' does manifests in some in the 'meaning', the only refined way to survive. |