| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 05/21/06 at 03:16 PM Terrific cosmic heat here - I love the ending question. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 05/21/06 at 03:36 PM I liked the sci-fi feeling to this. It is beautiful, yet cosmic. Loved the ending :-) |
| Posted by Kelvin Tan on 05/21/06 at 08:37 PM I love the final question... nice piece |
| Posted by Bruce W Niedt on 05/22/06 at 01:10 AM Excellent love poem, Chris - the opening and closing images really make this one special.... d:-) |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 05/22/06 at 06:01 AM So very optimistic, amid times in which passion, unattended, will burn to its own destruction. And the poets dreamed... |
| Posted by Maureen Glaude on 05/22/06 at 01:28 PM Reminds me somewhat of some of Lampman's poems for his Kate, very beautiful. |
| Posted by Sandy M. Humphrey on 05/22/06 at 09:06 PM Cosmic question of the ages, "would I burn to cinder or be or be Superman transformed?" such power you have assigned to femininity as if it were indeed kryptonite...yet with this poem women will swoon if you were indeed Superman...clever CS, very clever. smh :) |
| Posted by Alisa Js on 12/08/06 at 07:13 PM Indeed... star love...and all that entails... the wonder of the energy shared and experienced is totally amazing.... I have written a poem about this type of encounter with the exact same name a couple of years ago, amazing... I will look for it and post it.. and you can see.. thanks again for your time and kind sentiment.. aloha..;-) |
| Posted by Katerina T Nix on 04/20/07 at 08:43 AM I have always loved this poem ;p Kat. |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 08/30/09 at 06:36 PM The bounty of risk slides off of your poem into the heart. I gather from your text / a moment's delight with the opposite sex. Rock on, Chrisman. |
