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A Tree Cut Down

by Mary Ellen Smith

 

 

 

The limbs are cut, he stands there bare

Without a sprig of springtime there.

A ghostly sight mid seasonÂ’s green,

He almost looks like Halloween.

 

No nestling nest is in his arms

No canopy for natureÂ’s charms.

The wind it whistles in the cold

Oh how it makes one feel so old.

 

Does he lament his younger days?

His shade in grace and carefree ways?

Does he recall the childrenÂ’s glee

Their happy climbing in the tree?

 

Now heÂ’ll make way here on the street

For a tall steel light in grey concrete.

Illumination at a cost

Another shady place is lost.

 

Too soon theyÂ’ll come with jagged teeth

A few deep cuts there underneath

Will break his stand down to the root

To the chipper then or burned to soot.

04/19/2006

Posted on 04/19/2006
Copyright © 2024 Mary Ellen Smith

Member Comments on this Poem
Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 04/19/06 at 04:51 PM

Hi Mary Ellen. Excellent rhyme and subject matter. Thoughts of urban sprawl and the modernization of the neighborhood. Thanks for the read.

Posted by Rula Shin on 04/20/06 at 08:54 PM

Yes, and these living branches, now dead, we label collectively as a branch of human evolution, justifying destruction of a beautiful living organism for the sake of external 'growth' while internally we remain savages. This piece has a wonderful rhythm and rhyme and speaks to the poet's thoughtful nature.

Posted by Ashok Sharda on 04/21/06 at 03:21 AM

Well, eventually we will be paying the price for this so called 'growth' leading us to our own deaths reflecting our 'savage'so distinctly.

Posted by Charles E Minshall on 04/21/06 at 04:18 AM

It is hard to see a beautiful tree cut down. Charlie

Posted by Elizabeth Jill on 04/21/06 at 04:45 PM

Oh how we weep with the earth over these injustices. Sad beautiful poem…tribute § —Jill

Posted by Melissa Arel on 04/21/06 at 09:08 PM

Such a touching poem.. I've always had a fond connection to trees, and this is a great ode to the tragedies they endure. Well done, Mary-Ellen. :)

Posted by Quentin S Clingerman on 04/22/06 at 01:59 PM

A thought provoking look at human progress. A sentimental view of the losing of the green.

Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 04/24/06 at 12:55 AM

Powerful expression as usual, with a sad thought provoking message. Well done Mary Ellen!

Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 05/30/06 at 10:55 AM

beautifully rendered rhyme and rhythm and content of which my favorite lines, so deeply metaphoric, are--------illumination at a cost
another shady place is lost.

Posted by Jean Mollett on 08/30/06 at 02:18 AM

Hi Mary Ellen, It's a great write and kinda sad too. Losing a tree for a light post. trees are good for us. Progress can sometimes be so cruel.

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