Posted by Kathleen Wilson on 08/18/07 at 02:04 PM Intricately sensitive-- emotionally, sonically, visually. The "silence" is tangible here. Atmosphere is sensual... as if one enters through words the desert, the caves. The "wind" puzzling "cactus" is a fantastic image... and then the "sharded ice" recalls that near the end, to me, where the skaters do not hear or see... from above what they slide upon (like wind) along the surface-- (seen from below, the "razor" could meet the "eye"...) in silence.
A hush falls upon the poem, as the reader feels beginnings and endings in nothingness as pictured.
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