| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Gregory O'Neill on 10/13/05 at 08:52 PM "..the sweet lick of literature
rambling down white, white pages", that's really fine...the whole thing is.
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| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 10/13/05 at 11:04 PM Fabulous, my friend. Beautiful write. |
| Posted by Frankie Sanchez on 10/14/05 at 07:55 PM *we were the sweet lick of literature* -- sweet jesus this is great stuff. good word senor howard. like that? the only recommendation i would make -and trust me i'm being anal- would be to enhance the end slightly by adding more to the idea of 'historical fiction'... other than that, man oh man, stellar read! |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 10/14/05 at 08:23 PM Bradd, outstanding, amazing and unique. I echo what everyone else said. Write on!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 10/15/05 at 04:56 PM Excellent use of extended metaphor! Glad I had a chance to read this. Well deserved being on the top 10. |
| Posted by Kyle Anne Kish on 10/15/05 at 11:29 PM Bradd, you never cease to amaze me with the way you weave your words together and tell a story. The stories are clear, concise and filled with more than the things that make breakups hurt so much. It's got the emotions right out there, bare, raw and over the edge ... kinda like a roadkill still flopping in agony. Great stuff. :) |
| Posted by Ava Blu on 10/26/05 at 03:21 AM very happy you told me about this one since I had overlooked it. that second stanza takes my breath away. I adore you, hott boy. |
| Posted by Paul Marino on 11/18/05 at 10:33 PM aw. |
| Posted by Dave Fitzgerald on 08/20/08 at 01:49 PM A romcom write. Congrats on POTD! |
| Posted by George Hoerner on 08/20/08 at 02:23 PM Congratulations on POTD!! This is so well done! I think 'lives' run the same route. |
| Posted by Joe Cramer on 08/20/08 at 04:04 PM ... awesome! Congrats on POTD!!! |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/20/08 at 07:54 PM Wow! I'm pleased this is front and center! A great POTD! |
| Posted by Heide McAlister-Bates on 08/21/08 at 12:24 AM Excellent work, my friend. Congrats on a well-deserved poem of the day! x |
