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Melancholy Moon (graphic version)

by Glenn Currier

06/22/2005

Posted on 06/23/2005
Copyright © 2024 Glenn Currier

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Posted by Philip F De Pinto on 06/27/05 at 01:24 PM

as the full moon is my muse, you illustrate it is big and bright as it has ever been in the milky way tonight.

Posted by Agnes Eva on 07/03/05 at 04:46 PM

I would take out "full soft" since in the pic the moon is obviously full, and 'soft' doesn't add anything. Remember, haiku don't have to be 5-7-5. This is a lovely haiga. I love that moon pic! smouldering orange is the perfect way of describing it.

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