| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Charlie Morgan on 06/03/05 at 10:39 PM ...anneenglen, gal...that's one i wished i'd thought of ... what a succinct descripto de vida...we find our essence thru others and golly gee, you said so in wonderfully few words...peace, chaz |
| Posted by Max Bouillet on 06/04/05 at 04:05 PM Exquisite play on words that show the perspectives of two people in love. Great read. |
| Posted by Jayme L Helmick on 06/04/05 at 07:01 PM I LOVE this. This is so completely what I've been feeling lately, and you captured it brilliantly. Thank you for this! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 06/04/05 at 07:55 PM Words to live by. Well done Annie...Charlie |
| Posted by Karl Waldbauer on 06/05/05 at 05:44 AM This vision of the duality of love, two sides of the same coin, if you will, is another of your beautiful, concise gems, Anne. |
| Posted by Charles J Hannan on 06/05/05 at 03:21 PM A beautiful piece Anne....Almost as beautiful as the poet..;) |
| Posted by Mary Ellen Smith on 06/06/05 at 03:59 PM lovely and loving. |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 06/06/05 at 07:56 PM this is exactly how i feel about my husband... beautiful... blessings... |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 06/07/05 at 04:40 PM Superbly put Anne. Talk about putting an ocean in a nut shell! |
| Posted by Paganini Jones on 06/07/05 at 05:22 PM Mmm - I like the simplicity of this. It works at so many levels! |
| Posted by Rula Shin on 06/07/05 at 07:01 PM Unbelievably well done, just two phrases twisted and turned around each other, entangled this way and that to mean so much, communicate so much in their paradoxical positions, exposing perfectly not only the sentiment of deep love, but the delight and beauty of playing with language. Very nicely done Anne :-)
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| Posted by Lacy D Phillips on 06/07/05 at 07:51 PM Beautiful economy of words. |
| Posted by JD Clay on 06/16/05 at 05:30 PM I love the title of this Zenlike piece, Anne. Lost in the finding of yourself and harmonious alliance is the utopian quest of a true soul mate.
pe4ce... |
| Posted by Glenn Currier on 06/19/05 at 11:18 PM I'm with Charlie M. Wish I had thought of that first verse. What a zinger. Two couplets for a couple that I will not soon forget. |
| Posted by Joan Serratelli on 04/20/06 at 12:15 PM I LOVE that!!! That is so beautiful and in so few words, you said a worldful! Great write!! |
| Posted by Steven Kenworthy on 08/22/09 at 06:46 AM profound & precise...perfect because it feels like an honest moment. pretty. |
