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Bleu: hot and bothered
by Quinlan L GibsonSleek and lean, bleu velveteen.
Midnight light; Glisten, gleam.
Flowing as a guided dream.
Sexy, sweet with silver shoes.
You and I, we can fuse together.
Lick the weather, soft like feathers in the air.
Inside we can sing and scream
twist and turn a metal sheen.
head to toe and in between.
hot and bothered love machine. 02/24/2005 Author's Note: This piece is written about my new cobalt blue car. And if ya didn't know, my favorite color is blue. The most bestest thing about Bleu is she's a 2 door! I am back in 2 door ride status!!
Posted on 02/25/2005
Copyright © 2025 Quinlan L Gibson
| Member Comments on this Poem |
| Posted by Chris Sorrenti on 02/25/05 at 01:00 PM My favorite colour as well. Exhileratingly fun read and ride. Cheers! |
| Posted by Michele Schottelkorb on 02/25/05 at 03:10 PM reads like a sultry novel... awesome! |
| Posted by Charles E Minshall on 02/25/05 at 08:35 PM Nice work Quin...Charlie |
| Posted by Sarah Graves on 02/27/05 at 09:05 PM I enjoyed the read, you really bring the reader into your car.. lol, if you say so :) |
| Posted by Sam Roberts on 03/01/05 at 12:40 AM aww wow! This is fantastic, such a wonderful flow and the most fascinating images which stick.
x |
| Posted by Ginette T Belle on 03/01/05 at 01:03 AM lovely flow to it...great poem |
| Posted by Michelle Angelini on 08/28/06 at 10:43 PM Well, I write about cats and other animals, I guess poems can be written about cars. Congratulations on POTD!
~Chelle~ |
| Posted by Kristina Woodhill on 08/29/06 at 01:43 AM I love cobalt blue!!! This is a fine poem about your new love. Enjoy!! |
| Posted by Gregory R Schelske on 09/02/06 at 02:20 AM Quite an interesting perspective...I say that because my favorite cousin's name is Bleu. Somehow I have a difficult time seeing Bleu as a hot and bothered love machine. Great write, however. |
| Posted by Leslie Ann Eisenberg on 09/06/06 at 05:25 AM how wonderful to see you here on the front page! this is a more mature work from you. your style has really developed! wow!....very sensual, more so than usual because of the subtlety...fave line - -Lick the weather, soft like feathers in the air...mmmmm....the rhyme scheme is real natural, as is the flow. an excellent choice for POTD. belated congrats! hope to see you around more often! PK |
| Posted by Megan Langley on 10/13/08 at 02:42 PM I randomly came across this poem. This is excellent! The rhyming works so perfectly! |
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